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Learneng

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Which sentence is better

« on: June 13, 2008, 09:00:33 PM »

Any concerns that XX Inc had about the issues found after the release of DS were resolved by John.

or

Any concerns that XX Inc had about the issues those were found after the release of DS were resolved by John.

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PS: I asked you the same question in the chat box but I think you might have not noticed it.


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Re: Which sentence is better

« Reply #1 on: June 14, 2008, 12:56:13 AM »

Sorry about the chat box, I just turned my computer on again. It often says I am signed in when I'm not because my internet connections stays on all day.

The first sentence is the best.


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Re: Which sentence is better

« Reply #2 on: June 14, 2008, 01:01:24 AM »

Thanks a lot. I prepared a "meeting minute" and it was quite lengthy. With my minimal knowledge of the language I did a lousy job, it took an hour for my daughter to correct it yesterday. I need to send it by today and I wanted to add the above sentence in the meeting minutes previously corrected by my daughter. I wasn't sure which one is grammatically correct therefore I asked the question.

Thanks again


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