Bad English - 灵芝凝萃养颜水 (Ling Chih)

灵芝凝萃养颜水 (Ling Chih) manufactures and sells cosmetics for women, and is quite well known in the field. They sell all sorts of cleaners and lotions, and this particular example comes from their 'nutritional tonic.'

This section of text comes from the 'effects' section, which refers to how the lotion will function in the area of moisturising

The mistakes;

'Moisturising: Supply water, and make skin moisture and smooth. Renew and keep skin's normal PH rapidly, adjust skin's texture and make skin more ventilated.'

The corrections;

'Directions for use: The nutritional tonic rehydrates the skin by supplying water to dry areas. It acts quickly to balance the skin’s PH level whilst simultaneously opening the pores, creating soft and subtle skin.’